Here is my revised video. The changes come mainly at the end. I took out the cruise ship images because they really stuck out. I also added a couple of more images at the end that I feel better express what I think the song is trying to say. I interpreted the line in the song, "Relax, said the nightman, we are programmed to receive," to mean that it's natural as humans to desire money and material goods. I put in an image of several hands reaching for money to show that this is something we want. I also put in an image of a beach scene to represent the line, "you can checkout any time you want." I took this to mean that you can try to escape life and money and materialism by going on a peaceful vacation, but you can never truly escape these ideas. I added some ending credits as well that show my sources.
In terms of the audio, I tried to really fade out the ending in a smooth manner. I reworked the song in audacity. I also added the intro to Desperado during the credits.
I am pleased with the revisions.