This is my final Draft of this poem collage. I took my comments to heart and tried to fit them in.
Final Draft of Raymond Carver COLLAGE
Posted April 28th, 2008 by Angel Cockerham
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This is my final Draft of this poem collage. I took my comments to heart and tried to fit them in.
Comments
I really like the new
I really like the new version. You've certainly softened it up a bit in the second version, and its much easier on the eye. I know I mentioned it before, but I was really wanting a picture of the father figure in there somewhere. However, this version works really well with the imagery in the poem.
Very Nice
The colors work really well together. The muted tones really set the mood of the collage, and I think you did a really good job of incorporating and editing all of the layers together. This is an aesthetically pleasing collage.