I really like the new version. You've certainly softened it up a bit in the second version, and its much easier on the eye. I know I mentioned it before, but I was really wanting a picture of the father figure in there somewhere. However, this version works really well with the imagery in the poem.
The colors work really well together. The muted tones really set the mood of the collage, and I think you did a really good job of incorporating and editing all of the layers together. This is an aesthetically pleasing collage.
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I really like the new
I really like the new version. You've certainly softened it up a bit in the second version, and its much easier on the eye. I know I mentioned it before, but I was really wanting a picture of the father figure in there somewhere. However, this version works really well with the imagery in the poem.
Very Nice
The colors work really well together. The muted tones really set the mood of the collage, and I think you did a really good job of incorporating and editing all of the layers together. This is an aesthetically pleasing collage.