Love Story Revision
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I liked the main elements of the original collage, but I needed to fix the flowers- previously, they complicated the collage and made it seem like too much was going on. I erased a lot of the flowers, and added a bigger one on the bottom right corner. I also strengthened the opacity of the sky, so you can see it more behind the love note. I'm not really sure what else to do to make it better, so if you can think of anything please mention it!
I also like the presentation.
I also like the presentation. The collage seems well done, and I especially like the effect the little girl gives off by being transparent in front of castle.
Nice job on this! I really
Nice job on this! I really like the way you turned down the opacity of the young version of the girl to contrast it with the prominent image of the married couple. By doing that you really illustrate the idea of the song--a husband and wife reminiscing on their younger days--and it works really well, nice work!