Red Wheelbarrow Collage Revision #3


Red Wheelbarrow Collage Revision #3

I realized that in my past collage I was simply restating the poem, and considering the poem doesn't have more than fifteen words, I thought I had to add some elements of the poem's meaning. I added three elements--the chicken, the old farmer, and the produce--to illustrate a few of the things that depend upon the red wheelbarrow, as the poem indicates. Tell me what you think!

I like the new elements

I like the new elements (and the fact that you can actually see the chicken now), but I'm still not sure about that text. It just seems randomly stuck in there and perhaps not the right color. The edges on the apples are a bit weird too. Maybe try to make it seem like the apple layer is behind the wheelbarrow, like the apples are kind of going into the wheelbarrow?

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