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"The Market Economy" collage

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I agree with Jonathan, this is a well done collage. I feel like the elements are much better integrated to tell a story than with the character collage. The colors are great and the themes in here fit well with the poem. It might be worth experimenting a bit with the size, rotation, and placement of the elements. The pill bottle, for instance is great. How would having it a bit more present in the image shift the interpretation. Just things to think about. Nice work.

Nice Collage

After reading the poem The Market Economy, I see that your collage fits perfectly. You have great detail: everything from the yellow sky and smoke to the asthma inhaler. I especially like the look of the classic 1950s family that you used for your collage.

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