Taylor, nice work with the collage. I like the palette of colors overall and the feel they give. They also make the woman pop out very well. I wonder about the integration of the gun and camera. The gun might just be adjusted in its opacity or blending so that it pops out a bit more. The camera might be moved so it comes off the edge of the canvas, or maybe some other adjustments. I think the colors and tone are great, but they may be preventing those elements from having as much presence as they might. Good job.
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Taylor, nice work with the collage. I like the palette of colors overall and the feel they give. They also make the woman pop out very well. I wonder about the integration of the gun and camera. The gun might just be adjusted in its opacity or blending so that it pops out a bit more. The camera might be moved so it comes off the edge of the canvas, or maybe some other adjustments. I think the colors and tone are great, but they may be preventing those elements from having as much presence as they might. Good job.