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Stephanie, I like the topic and approach you've chosen here. The bar scene has a nice tone for the image. I'm not sure about the way the three pieces are integrated. I like the progression--woman, couple, train station. That seems great, but maybe looking for some replacement images or thinking about other ways to blend and flow them across the canvas will help. Right now, they feel kind of stuck on, rather than integrated--if that makes sense. The use of text is a great touch. I can show you how to add a drops shadows or use other effects to make the writing pop out a bit more.

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